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Nicole has her BA in Creative Writing & Literature and her MFA in Writing. Previously, she’s interned for literary agents, REUTS Publications, and Entangled Publishing. She’s worked for Pen Name Publishing and Pandamoon Publishing as acquisitions editor and editorial director.

I’m here to help.

Breaking into the writing scene can be intimidating, isolating, and full of rejection. It’s hard not to second guess yourself, your skills, and even your story. Sometimes all you need is someone to read your book or query over and give reassurance. What you wrote is great. But sometimes, you need help — a nudge in the right editing direction. Whether that’s someone to point out plot holes or someone to help you find better ways to pitch your book, I’m here for you.

Years of experience in publishing, including shortly running my own press, has made me realize time and time again what I love doing the most is helping writers grow, reach their goals, make their dreams come true.

To book your service, email:


Query Letter$25
Three passes of line-level editing of your query letter that includes advice on comp. titles.
Est. time: 1 business day.

First 50p Edit$50
Line-level editing of the first 50 (Word document) pages of your manuscript. Also includes developmental evaluation.
Est. time: 5 business days.

Full Manuscript Evaluation$150
One page evaluation providing an overview of the manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses. This is intended to help the writer to decide whether or not their manuscript is query (or publishing) ready.
Est. Time: 10 business days.

Developmental Edit$.003 per word
5 – 7 page in-depth evaluation of your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses. Special attention will be paid to character development, genre, setting/world building, pacing, style, and voice.
Est Time: 1 week.

How it works.

A 50% deposit is required at the time the service is booked. Once the deposit has been paid, this guarantees your spot in my work queue. You’ll be told how many clients are ahead of you and the estimated time between booking your service(s) and when work will begin. An e-mail will be sent to you the day work your project begins with a reminder of the estimated time for delivery (see menu for general timelines).

All invoices will be sent through PayPal and will include terms and conditions.

Sample edits are available upon request.

To book your services, please email ntommasulo @